Grell Chuunin
DP : 4 Character Name : Grell Uchiha Char Age : 16 Element : - Fire, Lightning Clan : - Uchiha Bloodline : - Sharingan, Sand Release Village : Hidden Sand Age : 30
| Subject: RP Sample Mon Dec 20, 2010 5:49 pm | |
| It was a bright morning. Sunlight was penetrating threw Grell's room window, the light made Grell's beautiful red hair shimmer and Glisten. She slowly woke up, raising her arms with a large yawn. Getting off her bed and standing up, she scratched her arm-pits as she made noises with her mouth, she was certainly not much of a morning person. She brushed her teeth and then went back to her room to brush her hair, standing infront of her mirror. In it you could see a tall five foot nine girl in her late teens, with long red hair that made it to the top of her abdomin. She had light skin but certainly not pale. She was a skinny girl with a fine amount of you know what. She wore a pair of red glasses that that was almost rectangular, at the bottom it appeared to be bent. One of the things that would call the most attention was her abnormal sharp teeth, they resembled that of a shark but she only has a single row of them. For the sake of the children watching this, she walked away from the mirror and changed in to her nice red maid outfit. Afterwards putting on her red loop earing she left her home, locking the door and slaming it shut. | |
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HotfireLegend ANBU
DP : 2 Character Name : Zyoshu Dakajora Char Age : 17 Element : Wind Clan : - Bloodline : - Village : Hidden Cloud
| Subject: Re: RP Sample Mon Dec 20, 2010 5:54 pm | |
| Nice, I'd give that Chuunin because I spotted a couple of typos and strange sentences that could be worded better, but well done.
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